 CommentsDevious Comments No really I apperciate it.
Thank you SO much for taking the time to do it. I really very much apperciate any critique at all because all they do is help me get better. I can see what you mean especially about the arm. I have such a hard time drawing obscured limbs. -- I'm a slave and I am a master.  I'm glad I could help ^^
I have a hard time with limbs myself ._. -- Bearer of Rainbowsheep Of Doom ~Joseph Frost Fan Girl~ I really want to do a comic, like a proper CV themed one but until my lines get better it has to stay away.
-- I'm a slave and I am a master. ooooh I'll be waiting until you get good enogh to do one. I'm pretty far away from doing one myself
-- Bearer of Rainbowsheep Of Doom ~Joseph Frost Fan Girl~ It's the end goal I think but we'll work hard and get there
 -- I'm a slave and I am a master. yep
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Sorry that it shall suck >3>
I think that the initial layout of the pose is pretty good. The torso is pretty good, but seems slightly big to me. -I'm not the greatest with torso's so I may be off-
The head is good. I like it.
To me, the left arm seems a little too short to me. Maybe try making the distance between the shoulder to the elbow longer and then the elbow to the wrist longer as well. The right arms good, the only thing is maybe we should see the hand just under the leg?
The legs look pretty good aside that they seem slightly too short. The right leg seems to be too short for the body. This area I may be really off in because I have horrible proporitions on limbs myself >3>
Well I hope my critque helped.
Overall it does look really good >3<